Masturbation Monday: Cocky

16 Responses

  1. niccihaydon says:

    Wow, that was hot! I love the anger at the beginning of this story, it really draws you in and gets you invested in the characters and then BANG (if you’ll excuse the pun lol).

    I also love how real these people are, real bodies, real desires, real emotions.

    • Mischa Eliot says:

      Yes! Wednesday Noir and I had a conversation about weight and I’m like… no one that hits on me knows what I look like beneath my clothing so how would I write that?

  2. May says:

    Love that he has chest hair – i l adore chest hair and the story is so hot and also romantic – great read

  3. Cara Thereon says:

    I like the way you transitioned from the anger to the sexy. It was very well done

  4. I love multi-dimensional characters who seem real. Your characters are great. This story is both hot and well-written. Bravo!

  5. Beatrix_B says:

    Great job! Your narrative is wonderfully descriptive and very sexy! I really enjoyed reading your work.

  6. I enjoyed this, Mischa, you always have something clever and sexy going on. I loved this line… The question pops out of my mouth like a lollipop.

  7. Kayla Lords says:

    I love that they burst the angry tension with laughter and then burst the REAL tension with something even better. And also, so lovely to have you back this week. XOXO

  8. Kitt says:

    Steamy read! I enjoyed it…ahh…err muchly!😏

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